Ship of Theseus is a dilemma of identity that raises the following question: If all the parts of a ship have been replaced, does it still remain the same ship?
It’s a lore as old as all the fables
of trinkets lost and found.
It’s a tale as new as echo of chimes
of bells just swung around.
A mighty emperor once built
a glorious hill fort to reside,
and created armies and navies alike
to keep by his side.
That display of power was topped by
a vessel, sturdy and impervious;
thus began the life of eventually what
the world called ‘Ship of Theseus’.
Many a battle was fought on board
and many more averted.
This ship became the life of legends
on shores it ever skirted.
Oh! The tales of its won glories
reached home before it made harbor
and lived on for generations to come,
on lands far and farther.
For centuries, its veneration continued
just as time took its toll.
In places that once shone brightly
formed many a tiny hole.
The people took care of it all,
replacing every bit that faltered.
And thus was replaced the mast and spar,
and deck was gradually altered.
The rudders that once guided the course
had withered and needed replacement,
just as the cleat and anchor turned
from whole to mere fragments.
The ship really needed the fixing
or so was the general opinion.
No one really noticed how each fix
sent the original parts to oblivion.
One day, a child wandered about
to play by the ship’s quarters.
She reached and exclaimed, “this isn’t the ship!”
to the people replacing the hawser.
And that’s when the people took notice
with cries, squeals and tremor.
In an effort to save the whole of it,
the ship was lost forever.
ยฉย Ship of Theseus by Neha Sharma is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivatives 4.0 International License.
No one really noticed how each fix
sent the original parts to oblivion
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Poem-ception?
You wrote this about that ship. But it’s also true for your poem. Your poem was like ship. You changed many words in it. And many lines in it. Re wrote stanzas. And presented us the newest version of your poem. But nobody notices how original poem with previous iterations gone to oblivion.
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This is officially my favorite comment yet, although I have to admit I didn’t think of it this way even once. Thank you finding such an extraordinary narrative in my rather simple poem ๐
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What a masterpiece. Loved it โค๏ธ
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Thanks a lot, Shantanu ๐
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My pleasure
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Now now, look at your writing. That’s brilliant brilliant but also brave of you. Loved every line.
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Thanks a lot, Mukti. Means so much ๐
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Beautiful poem..and we can have the same analogy with people also..sometimes society or friends or family push a person so much for changes, may be for better or worse, that finally individual looses his originality completely.
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I agree so much. It’s sad just how much this analogy makes sense in terms of people.
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how detailed and deep!! good one
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Thank you ๐
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If the heart remains the same, the outside of shipsโand peopleโ donโt really matter. Great poem!
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That’s one way to think as well. Thanks for the compliment ๐
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My pleasure reading!
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That’s what I had been thinking. But what if the heart had to change owing circumstances but the body remained the same, will it still be the same?
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I think itโs the heart that signifies true change, and not outward appearances, so if the heart changes, basically everything changes. Just my opinion…
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Hi Kaddie and Parikhit. The conversations about ‘Ship of Theseus’ have been very enlightening for me and it was this specific comment thread that made me finally decide to write about this. So thanks again for sharing your opinions. Here’s the longer version of my thanks ๐
https://literarylemonades.com/2018/07/10/interpretations/
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It was my pleasure to read and contemplate โShip of Theseusโ. Excellent work!
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Thank you, Kaddie ๐
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Indeed. It would indeed change everything.
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Iโve nominated you for The Mystery Blogger award ๐
https://dragonsinmycoffee.wordpress.com/2018/07/10/the-mystery-blogger-award-and-a-bit-of-who-i-am-outside-wp/
If your blog is award-free, please consider this nomination a compliment!
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Hi Soundarya! Thanks for the nomination. For some unknown reason, WordPress sent this comment to my spam folder
Let me follow through the requirements of this award by the evening. Thanks again โค
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Oh, that happens! I’m glad you went through your spam ๐ Excited to read yours โค
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I am excited to write it ๐ ๐
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Brilliant. I have never written something on topics like this.
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Thank you, Jaya. It was an interesting writing experiment for me ๐
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My pleasure โค๏ธ
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This is a very intriguing poem, I like it very much. It has a certain twist which keeps one entertained and entangled at the same time. I this this is well thought through and come from the heart of the topic. Thanks for posting is, it is really lovely.
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Thanks a lot for reading this. I loved your version a lot too ๐
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I do like your free style. It is very light but deep.
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Thanks again. We should certainly do a collab on some other topic like this ๐
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I like this idea, what do you have in mind?
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I just found this amazing list, thanks to amazing Reina ๐
https://ispeakloudthoughts.wordpress.com/2018/05/16/emotions-we-feel-but-cant-explain/
What about something from this?
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Beautiful!
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Thanks a lot, Grady ๐
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Your blog is diverse and interesting! What a breath of fresh air ๐ธ๐
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Thanks Diana! The feelings are mutual โค
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Aww! Splendid to read such kindness โค๏ธ
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โค โค
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Interesting read!
My take, itโs still the same ship. A ship is no defined by the exterior, but by the places where its been. The people were looking at it from the outside, what could only see with the eyes. They failed to see, the memories where within the adventure and the legacy it left behind; those can never be replaced!
A wonderful question!
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I understand your viewpoint but the ship still feels lost to me. Maybe that’s the fun outcome of writing on a dilemma ๐
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I just felt that this interpretation needs to go to the official post about various interpretations on the ‘Ship of Theseus’, so I have mentioned it over there. Thank you again for this interesting insight, Warren ๐
You can check out the post if you like:
https://literarylemonades.com/2018/07/10/interpretations/
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This is beautifully and exquisitely done. Loved the flow of words and how your words keep the reader glued till the end. You have a talent with words.
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Thanks a lot, Megha. The feelings are mutual โค โค
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Somewhat along the lines of the first poster’s comment, I could see this poem as a metaphor for the arts. A painting can be gradually altered (assuming an opaque media) until none of the original brush strokes are visible. An author can completely rewrite an early draft of a novel. Is it still the “original” work? Interesting philosophical question. ๐
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Wow that is yet another interesting interpretation of Ship of Theseus. I would have never though of this one. Thank you for taking out time to read it. It is readers like you who have inspired me to write separately on the various enlightening interpretations of my rather simple poem โค
https://literarylemonades.com/2018/07/10/interpretations/
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I realised that this interpretation needs to go to the official post about various interpretations on the ‘Ship of Theseus’, so I have mentioned it over there. Thank you again for this interesting comment, Cathleen โค
You can check it out if you wish: https://literarylemonades.com/2018/07/10/interpretations/
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Very nice!
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Thank you ๐
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Beautifully written with a very powerful message so well expressed: what has been destroyed in life will never be the same once we try a reconstruction. Thus these two lines give a sudden turn and the key to the poem’s main message:
“No one really noticed how each fix
sent the original parts to oblivion.”
To me the ship can even stand as a metaphor for life’s constant changes: things and people we send to oblivion, shattered human relationships as well, where we might try reconciliation but deep inside we know it will not be the same as before. We wait for our wounds to heal and dry in the sun but we are a landscape of scars.
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Thank you for reading this! It is pretty close to my heart and it is because of amazing readers like you that this poem has found its myriad of meanings. In fact, for the first time, I had to write a post on the various interpretations ‘Ship of Theseus’ brought. Here is the link in case you want to check it out :
https://literarylemonades.com/2018/07/10/interpretations/
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Thanks, will check it out.
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Hey Marta! I felt that this interpretation should go to the official post about various interpretations on the ‘Ship of Theseus’, so I have included it over there. Thank you again for this interesting comment โค
You can check out the mentioned post, if you wish:
https://literarylemonades.com/2018/07/10/interpretations/
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Thank you for including my interpretation of your beautiful poem. I like the summary of what all the people have seen. All the comments and analyses complement eachother.
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Nice storyline, with interlaced details of a ship and its after effects as a poem.
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Thanks a lot for reading this! Glad you liked it ๐
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Lovely! ๐
I have always loved the paradox. To see it in poetic form is just amazing! ๐
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Thank you! I am so glad you liked it ๐
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In life we often end up messing stuff we try to save merely out of the fear of loss.
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Very true! ๐
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This was a gorgeous write, profound and poignant in its beauty.
Bravo.
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Thank you so much for your encouragement, Drew! I am so glad it touched you ๐
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You are welcome. And it did.
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Thanks again! ๐
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If the comment I left offended you in
anyway, I sincerely apologise.
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Hi. I am extremely sorry for my delayed replies. I was traveling and wasn’t able to keep up with my WordPress notifications. There is no need for any apology from your end ๐
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Totally my fault.
I thought I had left a comment on your
wonderful piece, Ship of Theseus, and it had
been removed. I hadn’t. Please except my
humble apologies. ๐ณ
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It’s alright ๐
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