यह कविता एक मरते हुए व्यक्ति के आखिरी विचार हैं, जब वो ये चिन्तन कर रहा है कि उसने जीवन में आख़िर क्या खोया और क्या पाया ।
इन पल पल बहते लम्हों की हर याद संजोना भूल गया,
जीवन तो काट दिया मैंने पर जीवन जीना भूल गया ।
याद है वो दिन जब हाथ मे वो पहली कमाई थी,
वो कमाई जिसके लिये बचपन से योजनाएँ बनाई थी ।
सोचा था कभी कि उससे लाऊँगा किसी ज़रुरतमंद का खाना,
वो हाथ में जो आयी, उसे जेब में रख मैं अगली के इन्तज़ार में डूब गया ।
ऐसे जोड़ बहुत कुछ कमाया मैनें, बस वो दुआ कमाना भूल गया,
जीवन तो काट दिया मैंने पर जीवन जीना भूल गया ।
सोचा था कभी जाऊँगा चारों धाम, पर मैं सोचता ही रह गया ।
सोचा था मॉं को दूँगा साड़ी, पर मैं सोचता ही रह गया ।
सोचा था कुछ कर जाऊँ, फिर भाई के साथ पतंग उड़ाऊँगा ।
सोचा था कुछ बन जाऊँ, फिर बहन को चुनरी लाऊँगा ।
अपने अपनों को देकर यही भ्रम कि मैं दिल से उनका अपना नहीं,
अपने दिल को देकर यही भ्रम कि फुर्सत पाकर कभी उनका बनूँगा ।
आज बन गया सब बनकर भी अधूरा, मेरे सामने ये जीवन बीत गया,
इस पैसे से सब ख़रीदा मैंने, बस दुआ कमाना भूल गया ।
शोहरत तो हासिल की काफ़ी पर प्यार कमाना भूल गया,
जीवन तो काट दिया मैंने पर जीवन जीना भूल गया ।
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November 4, 2016 at 10:20 am
Wow
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May 6, 2017 at 10:45 pm
Beautiful..
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August 7, 2017 at 8:21 am
Woah.. that was intense 👌 Great work..
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August 14, 2017 at 12:16 pm
Thank you 🙂
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August 13, 2017 at 12:34 am
बेहद उम्दा अभिव्यक्ति है मैम
बहुत खूब
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August 14, 2017 at 12:17 pm
Thanks Vaibhaw 🙂
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August 17, 2017 at 2:09 pm
Nice
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August 30, 2017 at 6:55 pm
अतिसुंदर।
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August 31, 2017 at 6:52 pm
Thank you 🙂
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June 22, 2018 at 6:40 pm
Wah …..kitni khubsurat kavita likhti hain aap …..padh kar maja aaa gaya…..
इन पल पल बहते लम्हों की हर याद संजोना भूल गया,
जीवन तो काट दिया मैंने पर जीवन जीना भूल गया ।
ye panktiyan ek dam dil ko chhu gayee.
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June 22, 2018 at 9:46 pm
Thank you 🙂
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September 12, 2018 at 7:03 pm
Fame forgot to earn love on a lot of fame,
Life was cut off I forgot to live life. 👌👌👌
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September 12, 2018 at 10:03 pm
Thank you for reading. So glad to know it resonated with you 🙂
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September 12, 2018 at 8:24 pm
Reality of life.. you expressed it beautifully!!
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September 12, 2018 at 10:05 pm
Thanks Kranti! So glad you liked it 🙂
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September 12, 2018 at 8:29 pm
जीवन निकल जाता है और हम जीना भूल जाते हैं। भागते भागते जब सब हासिल कर लिया तो इतना थक जाते हैं कि हस्ना भूल जाते हैं।
This is amazingly beautiful……..I so loved it Neha 😊
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September 12, 2018 at 10:05 pm
Thanks a lot, Sakshi! You are always so encouraging ❤
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September 12, 2018 at 10:05 pm
My pleasure 😊❤️
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September 12, 2018 at 10:06 pm
❤
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September 12, 2018 at 9:05 pm
Amazing poem and specially “sohrat to hasil ki kafi lekin pyar kamana bhul gaya” this line is really good.☺️
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September 12, 2018 at 10:06 pm
Thank you so much 🙂
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September 13, 2018 at 7:17 am
Beautifully expressed 👌👌
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September 13, 2018 at 11:52 am
Thanks Sushma 🙂
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September 13, 2018 at 7:58 am
I love this ❤ its great ☺
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September 13, 2018 at 11:52 am
Thank you 🙂
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September 13, 2018 at 10:12 am
Your post is a gentle reminder to me about things that matter.
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September 13, 2018 at 11:53 am
I am glad it resonated with you. Thanks for reading it 🙂
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September 13, 2018 at 2:11 pm
Happy to read posts in Hindi after a long time..!! Keep posting such posts.
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September 13, 2018 at 4:42 pm
Thank you! So glad you think so 🙂
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September 13, 2018 at 6:45 pm
‘You work and work for years and years, you’re always on the go
You never take a minute off, too busy makin’ dough
Someday, you say, you’ll have your fun, when you’re a millionaire
Imagine all the fun you’ll have in your old rockin’ chair’ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nFxjnUPRwx4
I am not sure how well the translator has translated your words, but it is sad if we come to the end of our lives without remembering to live. I have linked to an old and jaunty song which always reminds me to live now.
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September 16, 2018 at 2:16 pm
Thank you so much for the link! This is exactly what I meant with this poem ❤
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September 16, 2018 at 2:54 pm
🙂 🙂
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September 13, 2018 at 11:53 pm
Good one..@neha
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September 16, 2018 at 2:16 pm
Thanks Prabhat! 🙂
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September 14, 2018 at 10:50 am
अद्भुद
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September 16, 2018 at 2:34 pm
धन्यवाद! 🙂
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September 14, 2018 at 7:01 pm
This is brilliant Neha! Exactly we go through life but are we actually living it!
And thank you so much for writing in Hindi! 🙂
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September 16, 2018 at 2:35 pm
Thanks for the compliment, Parikhit! Some of my favorite thoughts come to my mind in Hindi 🙂
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September 15, 2018 at 4:06 pm
hey Neha…I am new to blog writing…started my blog 5 days before… I searched for Indian writers and you were the first one to appear…I must say you are an avid writer…I hope you would help me to establish mine. Please find out 5 minutes and visit my blog, your suggestions and guidance would be precious for me.
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September 16, 2018 at 2:36 pm
Hi Gaurav! I will surely check out your blog 🙂
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September 16, 2018 at 9:34 pm
Thanks Neha
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September 15, 2018 at 4:07 pm
http://www.thebewilderedindian.wordpress.com
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September 16, 2018 at 8:49 am
Lovely
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September 16, 2018 at 2:37 pm
Thank you! 🙂
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September 16, 2018 at 5:34 pm
Hey Neha, your poem is deep feelingfull.
i have also started blog writing..plz check and give me your suggestion
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September 16, 2018 at 6:10 pm
Hi Anurag! Thanks for the compliment. I will definitely check out your blog 🙂
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September 16, 2018 at 9:33 pm
Since it’s all written in hindi(.I think), i can’t read it but would like to if a translation is available.
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September 17, 2018 at 10:37 am
This poem was my first attempt of translation, so it isn’t very well-done. I am sharing the link, all the same 🙂
https://literarylemonades.com/2016/11/05/a-life-that-slipped-away-without-a-hint/
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September 17, 2018 at 11:27 am
It’s a good read. Touches on some hard realities of now a days workaholic living.
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September 17, 2018 at 4:17 pm
Thank you. So glad to know you think so 🙂
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September 19, 2018 at 1:49 pm
Fabulous post
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September 19, 2018 at 2:58 pm
Thank you
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September 19, 2018 at 1:49 pm
Please read my post
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September 26, 2018 at 11:41 pm
Kabhi bhool Jana acha
Kabhi yaad karna bura
Zindagi toh yunhi gujar jayegi
Kya acha Kya bura
Waah bhi ta hua jeevan
Good One Neha
Shiva
🌷💞
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September 27, 2018 at 3:44 pm
Thank you so much for your lovely comment 🙂
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October 24, 2018 at 7:31 pm
I love the way you write your imagination..,but its just a thought in.. fear of loosing meaning of life.. those who live do care about what they get in their life.. but for person going beyond life would never mind it
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October 24, 2018 at 7:33 pm
I mean who is going beyond life… Why such things will matter to him…
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November 9, 2018 at 1:55 pm
It’s not always necessary for those who are going beyond life to let go of their regrets. This poem is of one such case 🙂
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November 15, 2018 at 2:39 am
achha : D
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December 17, 2018 at 7:57 am
Beautiful retrospection
Please visit my site and let me know if you like it
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December 17, 2018 at 3:14 pm
Thanks. Will definitely check out your site 🙂
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June 23, 2019 at 7:30 am
दिल को छू लिया आपकी बात ने, आजकल के जीवन की यही हकीकत है ।
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July 2, 2019 at 9:17 pm
Nice poem Neha☺️
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July 9, 2019 at 1:36 am
Thank you 🙂
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July 5, 2019 at 8:32 pm
बहुत सुन्दर लिखा
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December 8, 2019 at 3:21 pm
Nice.
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