The tears of a phoenix heal the wounds, but can they mean something?
She would burn with a quiet, dancing flame
and would rise like a mighty cloud.
Her tears sought by one and all
from the ever impatient crowd.
With every glide and flap and flight,
she brought peace, else unfound.
A sand grain for each wound she healed
would have formed a seamless ground.
No one knew just what went by
in the depths of those teary eyes.
Her extra tears brought a larger crowd
just as she gazed past the skies.
She finally burnt with a screeching flame,
dreaming through her final ordeal.
The crowds kept waiting but she never rose back
because the Phoenix’s tears were real.
November 17, 2018 at 1:06 am
Very original!
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November 17, 2018 at 1:16 am
Thank you so much ❤
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November 17, 2018 at 1:20 am
You’re welcome.
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November 17, 2018 at 1:21 am
🙂
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November 17, 2018 at 2:12 am
Красивая поэтическая сказка. Как идет изучение русского языка? 🙂
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November 19, 2018 at 8:49 pm
Спасибо Васил! Всё идёт очень хорошо. И Как поживаешь? 🙂
P.S. Is that correct? 😀
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November 19, 2018 at 9:43 pm
Yes, that’s correct. Уже зима здесь! 🙆
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November 30, 2018 at 6:42 pm
Haha! I can say the same for Delhi but our winters are nothing compared to yours 🙂
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November 17, 2018 at 9:38 am
This is glorious! 💛
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November 19, 2018 at 8:50 pm
Thanks a lot, Isha! So nice to talk to you after such a long time. How have you been? 🙂
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November 17, 2018 at 11:26 am
So amazing ❤
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November 19, 2018 at 8:51 pm
Thanks a lot 🙂
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November 17, 2018 at 10:50 pm
So amazing and smooth like a hot knife from butter…..
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November 19, 2018 at 8:54 pm
Thank you 🙂
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November 17, 2018 at 11:30 pm
Amazing written
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November 19, 2018 at 8:54 pm
Thanks a lot Sushma 🙂
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November 18, 2018 at 4:56 pm
Awesome and it is amazing lines
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November 19, 2018 at 8:55 pm
Thanks a lot 🙂
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November 19, 2018 at 9:14 pm
Strength giving it’s all until it can’t anymore. Beautiful, Neha!
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November 30, 2018 at 6:40 pm
Thanks a lot, Susi 🙂
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November 30, 2018 at 6:45 pm
You are so very welcome, Neha!
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November 30, 2018 at 6:48 pm
❤
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November 19, 2018 at 10:42 pm
You wrote about Fawkes. The Phoenix is a great topic for writing.
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November 30, 2018 at 6:43 pm
Fawkes was a happy phoenix. I imagined a rather unhappy one for this, and phoenixes are so interesting to write on 🙂
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November 19, 2018 at 10:52 pm
Absolutely beautiful. Writing helps me so much! Thanks for the good read.
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November 30, 2018 at 6:44 pm
Thank you for reading it. So glad to know you liked it 🙂
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November 30, 2018 at 3:52 am
Perfect from start to finish, but your finale…..exquisite.
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November 30, 2018 at 6:48 pm
Thank you, Drew! Means a lot 🙂
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November 30, 2018 at 6:48 pm
My pleasure
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November 30, 2018 at 6:48 pm
🙂
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January 31, 2019 at 6:03 am
It’s nice
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February 26, 2019 at 1:01 pm
Thanks Naman 🙂
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February 6, 2019 at 12:50 pm
Brilliant
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February 26, 2019 at 1:01 pm
Thank you 🙂
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February 26, 2019 at 1:04 pm
Most welcome and afternoon ❤
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February 26, 2019 at 1:05 pm
🙂
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February 26, 2019 at 1:06 pm
😊
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