The tears of a phoenix heal the wounds, but can they mean something?
She would burn with a quiet, dancing flame
and would rise like a mighty cloud.
Her tears sought by one and all
from the ever impatient crowd.
With every glide and flap and flight,
she brought peace, else unfound.
A sand grain for each wound she healed
would have formed a seamless ground.
No one knew just what went by
in the depths of those teary eyes.
Her extra tears brought a larger crowd
just as she gazed past the skies.
She finally burnt with a screeching flame,
dreaming through her final ordeal.
The crowds kept waiting but she never rose back
because the Phoenix’s tears were real.
Very original!
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Thank you so much โค
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Youโre welcome.
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ะัะฐัะธะฒะฐั ะฟะพััะธัะตัะบะฐั ัะบะฐะทะบะฐ. ะะฐะบ ะธะดะตั ะธะทััะตะฝะธะต ััััะบะพะณะพ ัะทัะบะฐ? ๐
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ะกะฟะฐัะธะฑะพ ะะฐัะธะป! ะัั ะธะดัั ะพัะตะฝั ั ะพัะพัะพ. ะ ะะฐะบ ะฟะพะถะธะฒะฐะตัั? ๐
P.S. Is that correct? ๐
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Yes, that’s correct. ะฃะถะต ะทะธะผะฐ ะทะดะตัั! ๐
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Haha! I can say the same for Delhi but our winters are nothing compared to yours ๐
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This is glorious! ๐
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Thanks a lot, Isha! So nice to talk to you after such a long time. How have you been? ๐
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So amazing โค
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Thanks a lot ๐
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So amazing and smooth like a hot knife from butter…..
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Thank you ๐
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Amazing written
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Thanks a lot Sushma ๐
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Awesome and it is amazing lines
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Thanks a lot ๐
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Strength giving it’s all until it can’t anymore. Beautiful, Neha!
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Thanks a lot, Susi ๐
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You are so very welcome, Neha!
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You wrote about Fawkes. The Phoenix is a great topic for writing.
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Fawkes was a happy phoenix. I imagined a rather unhappy one for this, and phoenixes are so interesting to write on ๐
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Absolutely beautiful. Writing helps me so much! Thanks for the good read.
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Thank you for reading it. So glad to know you liked it ๐
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Perfect from start to finish, but your finale…..exquisite.
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Thank you, Drew! Means a lot ๐
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My pleasure
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It’s nice
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Thanks Naman ๐
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Brilliant
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Thank you ๐
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Most welcome and afternoon โค
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This is amazing. I loved it
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thank you ๐
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